I'd like some Evaluations from higher tier Players?

So, I've been playing ranked recently and there are some things that have been bothering me lately. I'm currently ranked in the lowest possible tier, and haven't surpassed Bronze. I've been playing since Season 5, though, back then I rarely played for anything but being butt buddies with my pals. The summer of season 6 (so I guess last summer) I started playing more. However, I didn't play ranked. Now, recently, I've started playing ranked and I want to improve on this game. So I'd like some feedback as to what I can improve personally; please make it in depth and intelligible to me. I've made it a goal to get out of Bronze at the very least.
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