: That is true, i just kinda left it there as 95% of things in league make no sense in that way (why would jinx benifit from swords when she has a gun, why would nami move faster with boots and other things of the sort) and it lets him have an easier lane against most ranged champions for when he is in lane though if the passive was reworked to work in range of the blood splash... it could be an AoE around him so that he did a ton of AoE damage in teamfights
> [{quoted}](name=NaughtButSocks,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=l94K0ErH,comment-id=000200000000,timestamp=2015-08-28T01:54:05.150+0000) > > That is true, i just kinda left it there as 95% of things in league make no sense in that way (why would jinx benifit from swords when she has a gun, why would nami move faster with boots and other things of the sort) and it lets him have an easier lane against most ranged champions for when he is in lane > > though if the passive was reworked to work in range of the blood splash... it could be an AoE around him so that he did a ton of AoE damage in teamfights That would be so op.. That's why I suggested melee only. Cuz in reality if I'm shooting a Xenomorph from 10 years I'm not gonna get hit with blood splatter. I think it should only count within 125-150 range and scale of hp% but have it low. Too high and it would be broken.
tobirus (NA)
: [Champ Concept] (first time take it easy on me) Xeno - The extraterrestial
Also I wasn't trying to go for a complete end all kit but just liked the idea and kinda wanted to open a conversation about it. I love the feedback hopefully rito sees this, cuz NaughButSocks did a good job. GG.
: This is not a bad idea, his backstory is... well with rito lore nowadays its better than your average champion but still relatively unimaginative, i like the concept of an alien in league But i would personally completely rework the moveset as what i see honestly seems kinda bland, some mobility and standard steroids make it look kinda boring to play (think about how loaded modern kits are) What i would do is Passive: toxic blood When Xeno Dies he leaves an AoE poison field for X + (x./lvl) seconds dealing X +(x.x AP) True damage per second over one second (pretty small but it was a super cool idea so i figured it should stay) When an enemy auto attacks Xeno they take X + (x/lvl) True damage over one second (think gromp buff kinda) Q: Third limb Passive: Blindside Every x seconds Xeno attacks a random target with his tail (only while in combat), this attack does X% of his AD and heals him for half the damage done, this attack will hit even if Xeno is blinded Active: Tail Lash Xeno lashes his tail in a straight line slowing the first enemy it collides with (think Tahm) and deals X + (x.x AD) physical Damage W: Mad Rush I like it, Small dash with a MS buff at the end is what i assume you where saying and that is a great idea, but i would like to add that if he collides with an enemy they are briefly stunned (like tiny stun, maybe .25 seconds), take X +(x.x% bonus hp) physical damage, and this ability cannot be interrupted (screw you janna) E: Rage of a dying race Passive: Blood soaked claws If Xeno has taken damage within the last seconds his basic abilities and auto attacks apply a DoT that does magical damage equal to his passives DoT Active: Xeno Gains X AS +(x/lvl), X MS (flat) and X bonus AD for X seconds R: Foreign species Passive: "Frontal lobe Membrane" Xeno gains vision of enemies in the fog of war per rank (normal vision levels of 1200 units + X/X/X) Active: Eggsecution ( sorry i could not do better XD) Xeno jumps on to an enemy and latches an egg onto them, if they die within X seconds the egg hatches and Xeno gains mini Xeno that gains a 10th of his stats and benefits from all his passives and X% of the cooldown will be refunded, when cast on enemy champions the mini xeno will be larger and gain 1/4 of xeno's stats, and the cooldown will not be refunded, if the target does not die before the egg hatches it will explode doing X + (x.x AP) magical damage in a small AoE IDK maybe i just like throwing lots of fancy nonsense into a champions kit but i think that what i have here is an improved version of what you have done i will be honest here, your idea is pretty cool, DoT after death passive is cool AF and figured that i could add to this in a way that made it more fun to play and maintained the core of your ideas, lemme know what you think, i think that what i have here could be fun because you could build him however the hell you wanted and get away with it (though obviously favoring an AD build) i have kinda reworked it so that he could be played mid top or jungle with the emphases on jungle, idk maybe i overloaded this, maybe the true damage is too much, idk but whatever i was bored so i typed all this out, hope you enjoyed :)
> [{quoted}](name=NaughtButSocks,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=l94K0ErH,comment-id=0002,timestamp=2015-08-28T01:25:23.141+0000) > > This is not a bad idea, his backstory is... well with rito lore nowadays its better than your average champion but still relatively unimaginative, i like the concept of an alien in league > > But i would personally completely rework the moveset as what i see honestly seems kinda bland, some mobility and standard steroids make it look kinda boring to play (think about how loaded modern kits are) > > What i would do is > > Passive: toxic blood > When Xeno Dies he leaves an AoE poison field for X + (x./lvl) seconds dealing X +(x.x AP) True damage per second over one second > (pretty small but it was a super cool idea so i figured it should stay) > When an enemy auto attacks Xeno they take X + (x/lvl) True damage over one second (think gromp buff kinda) > > > > Q: Third limb > > Passive: Blindside > Every x seconds Xeno attacks a random target with his tail (only while in combat), this attack does X% of his AD and heals him for half the damage done, this attack will hit even if Xeno is blinded > > Active: Tail Lash > Xeno lashes his tail in a straight line slowing the first enemy it collides with (think Tahm) and deals X + (x.x AD) physical Damage > > > > W: Mad Rush > I like it, Small dash with a MS buff at the end is what i assume you where saying and that is a great idea, but i would like to add that if he collides with an enemy they are briefly stunned (like tiny stun, maybe .25 seconds), take X +(x.x% bonus hp) physical damage, and this ability cannot be interrupted (screw you janna) > > > > E: Rage of a dying race > > Passive: Blood soaked claws > If Xeno has taken damage within the last seconds his basic abilities and auto attacks apply a DoT that does magical damage equal to his passives DoT > > Active: Xeno Gains X AS +(x/lvl), X MS (flat) and X bonus AD for X seconds > > > R: Foreign species > > Passive: "Frontal lobe Membrane" > Xeno gains vision of enemies in the fog of war per rank (normal vision levels of 1200 units + X/X/X) > > Active: Eggsecution ( sorry i could not do better XD) > Xeno jumps on to an enemy and latches an egg onto them, if they die within X seconds the egg hatches and Xeno gains mini Xeno that gains a 10th of his stats and benefits from all his passives and X% of the cooldown will be refunded, when cast on enemy champions the mini xeno will be larger and gain 1/4 of xeno's stats, and the cooldown will not be refunded, if the target does not die before the egg hatches it will explode doing X + (x.x AP) magical damage in a small AoE > > IDK maybe i just like throwing lots of fancy nonsense into a champions kit but i think that what i have here is an improved version of what you have done > > i will be honest here, your idea is pretty cool, DoT after death passive is cool AF and figured that i could add to this in a way that made it more fun to play and maintained the core of your ideas, lemme know what you think, i think that what i have here could be fun because you could build him however the hell you wanted and get away with it (though obviously favoring an AD build) i have kinda reworked it so that he could be played mid top or jungle with the emphases on jungle, idk maybe i overloaded this, maybe the true damage is too much, idk but whatever i was bored so i typed all this out, hope you enjoyed :) Duuuude. ^^^^ ^.^ I love what you've done, its much better than what I did. The backstory is meh but its cheesey enough to work. But that kit is definitely much improved. The tail lash passive is pretty slick. Also The W was that the MS scaled with MS if that makes sence, and yea a small stun would work. But good shit man, that's spot on. {{summoner:31}} EDIT: Also the passive acid damage should only apply to melee. As a ranged champ wouldn't get hit with the splash.
: The first part of the passive seems kinda out of place... the acid seems very interesting, but usually death passives have a unique thing -zyra true damage skill shot, karth FFFFREEE SPEEELLLLSSSSS, sion %hp as ms, kog true damage running at your face. Q-ok ish w- seems kinda voli hec mixed together. e- somewhat like tiger stance isn't r- interesting Overall interesting concept maybe try to find his kit more engaging/unique intenral interactions in his kit
> [{quoted}](name=Dr Nuka Cola,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=l94K0ErH,comment-id=0001,timestamp=2015-08-28T00:29:50.591+0000) > > The first part of the passive seems kinda out of place... the acid seems very interesting, but usually death passives have a unique thing -zyra true damage skill shot, karth FFFFREEE SPEEELLLLSSSSS, sion %hp as ms, kog true damage running at your face. > > Q-ok ish > w- seems kinda voli hec mixed together. > e- somewhat like tiger stance isn't > r- interesting > > Overall interesting concept maybe try to find his kit more engaging/unique intenral interactions in his kit Well the idea is that Xenomorphs don't have eyes. They use some type of echo location / sensory ability. So they can see where someone is without being seen. I thought I could work that into the kit. The w also plays into that in the fact they can run super fast and in the games they have gotten on all fours to run someone down. As for the E I wasn't so sure, they have these sharp claws on their hands and can swipe. I guess it is it like Tiger Stance. I just tried to keep the kit to what a Xenomorph would do and how he would fit into league. The ulti def needs some tuning I kinda like /u/Regonas's idea.
regonas (EUNE)
: Well, you see facehuggers and fully grown Xenomorphs are two different being. Fully grow aliens don't insert their eggs into people, they lay eggs and in those eggs lives facehuggers. Maybe try to base your R on that.
> [{quoted}](name=regonas,realm=EUNE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=l94K0ErH,comment-id=000000000000,timestamp=2015-08-27T22:47:27.397+0000) > > Well, you see facehuggers and fully grown Xenomorphs are two different being. Fully grow aliens don't insert their eggs into people, they lay eggs and in those eggs lives facehuggers. Maybe try to base your R on that. Interesting... kinda like teemo shrooms, once proc'd the hugger jumps on the victim and but puts a mark and if its consumed does damage and you get a little alien to follow you around til it dies or matures?
regonas (EUNE)
: I have bad news for you, mate. In this forum only very few good ideas are treated good. Even if you suggest an awesome champion concept, there are high chance that trolls and haters will downvote it to no end. Here people care only about skins. Nevertheless, i wish you luck and i can say that that you on right track with this champion. Some of abilities looks pretty ok (i like that acid blood passive), but ulty like that makes no sense. You should put some more thoughts and work into Q, W, E abilities and rework R ability. Also, some basic artwork would be nice. P.S. Don't forget that we already have something similar to Xenomorphs and it is {{champion:31}}.
> [{quoted}](name=regonas,realm=EUNE,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=l94K0ErH,comment-id=0000,timestamp=2015-08-27T22:27:57.706+0000) > > I have bad news for you, mate. In this forum only very few good ideas are treated good. Even if you suggest an awesome champion concept, there are high chance that trolls and haters will downvote it to no end. Here people care only about skins. > > Nevertheless, i wish you luck and i can say that that you on right track with this champion. Some of abilities looks pretty ok (i like that acid blood passive), but ulty like that makes no sense. You should put some more thoughts and work into Q, W, E abilities and rework R ability. > Also, some basic artwork would be nice. > > P.S. Don't forget that we already have something similar to Xenomorphs and it is {{champion:31}}. True we do have cho'gath. As far as art work I'm not an artist. Just think of an Aliens Xenomorph I'm pretty sure most people know what they look like. I think the R is pretty good personally, maybe tone it down or possible change it. But in the movies the face huggers would implant embryo's into their victims and out pops a little alien from the chest... Hmm. Maybe make it so you get a small follower kinda like malz and at different ulti ranks has better stats? Thanks for the feedback and again this was mocked up in like an hour, lol.
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Wuks (NA)
: Hey tobirus, Based on what Riot Ahab indicated, my assumption would be yes. I believe people in LAN will be given free transfer tokens to NA once the server moves.
> [{quoted}](name=Wuks,realm=NA,application-id=osqw6G4M,discussion-id=Aa0h2bKZ,comment-id=0000,timestamp=2015-08-17T23:42:23.526+0000) > > Hey tobirus, > > Based on what Riot Ahab indicated, my assumption would be yes. I believe people in LAN will be given free transfer tokens to NA once the server moves. I hope so. I really want a second 30 on NA and grinding it out a 3rd time doesn't sound appealing at all.
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AnonTwo (NA)
: > [{quoted}](name=ZombeezyJeezy,realm=NA,application-id=mNBeEEkI,discussion-id=b7bg3zY0,comment-id=000700000000,timestamp=2015-08-14T21:03:37.610+0000) > > http://linustechtips.com/main/topic/428727-windows-10-is-a-keylogger/ My problem with that site is that 1. It doesn't say anywhere how they found what information was being taken 2. It's an anti microsoft site, a bit of a bias going on there.
> [{quoted}](name=AnonTwo,realm=NA,application-id=mNBeEEkI,discussion-id=b7bg3zY0,comment-id=0007000000000000,timestamp=2015-08-14T21:32:41.096+0000) > > My problem with that site is that > 1. It doesn't say anywhere how they found what information was being taken > 2. It's an anti microsoft site, a bit of a bias going on there. Right? It's from a beardneck gnu loving site that bashes MS at every corner, lol. It's the equivalent of infowars.com lol
Korensky (NA)
: Hello, There's no Santa Monica on this trace. It's physically impossible to get from PA to Santa Monica and back in 39ms using current technology :) You're hitting our New York City POP at hop 9 and hop 10 is Chicago.
> [{quoted}](name=Korensky,realm=NA,application-id=osqw6G4M,discussion-id=0AAkGipA,comment-id=0000,timestamp=2015-08-14T21:27:27.843+0000) > > Hello, > > There's no Santa Monica on this trace. It's physically impossible to get from PA to Santa Monica and back in 39ms using current technology :) > > You're hitting our New York City POP at hop 9 and hop 10 is Chicago. So when I did a check on the last hop before the server (using a geo location tool base on IP) and it says that its a RIOT IP out of Santa Monica,[I used this site.](http://www.infosniper.net/index.php?ip_address=104.160.132.35&map_source=1&overview_map=1&lang=1&map_type=1&zoom_level=7) Also thanks for the reply. Also why would I hit the NYC pop? Also Any plans to peer with my ISP? EDIT: It seems on a new tracert that hop 9 is gone and I now my ms is lower. Avg ping is now 27ms. So something changed.
: Windows 10 also has the ability to record all of your personal information through a built-in Keylogger that sends everything you type, view and download to Microsoft servers.
> [{quoted}](name=ZombeezyJeezy,realm=NA,application-id=mNBeEEkI,discussion-id=b7bg3zY0,comment-id=0007,timestamp=2015-08-14T20:49:07.803+0000) > > Windows 10 also has the ability to record all of your personal information through a built-in Keylogger that sends everything you type, view and download to Microsoft servers. Source? <tin foil hat>
: Windows 10 has a record option in the Xbox app.
How do you do this? I have it Full Screen borderless and I couldn't get it to function. Suggestions are welcome
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: > [{quoted}](name=tobirus,realm=NA,application-id=osqw6G4M,discussion-id=q8sJLh1M,comment-id=0000,timestamp=2015-08-11T23:01:08.917+0000) > > Hey do you plan peering with my ISP Armstrong Cable? (Ty for all that you do as well.) Pls roit, a lot of people in a couple east coast states have them as ISP.
> [{quoted}](name=Crazeh Fruit,realm=NA,application-id=osqw6G4M,discussion-id=q8sJLh1M,comment-id=00000000,timestamp=2015-08-12T02:17:38.074+0000) > > Pls roit, a lot of people in a couple east coast states have them as ISP. I actually work there. I've sent a few messages to RiotAhab about this and haven't gotten an answer. The good news is we use Cogent and Level 3 for our backbones. So we should be ok, I think as they peered with them. I just want a damn answer, lol.
: NA Server Roadmap Update: Upcoming NA Server Move
Hey do you plan peering with my ISP Armstrong Cable? (Ty for all that you do as well.)
: They are on the list of people we are reaching out to for Peering in Chicago. Are you in Ohio area?
> [{quoted}](name=Riot WizardOTL,realm=NA,application-id=osqw6G4M,discussion-id=hXxTbpiI,comment-id=002f0000,timestamp=2015-04-17T15:42:14.410+0000) > > They are on the list of people we are reaching out to for Peering in Chicago. Are you in Ohio area? Hey I just seen this. Western, PA. I actually work for them. lol.
: NA Server Roadmap: South Bridge update
Any word on my ISP, Armstrong Cable? It's a mid size cable operator. Thanks in advance.
: NA Server Roadmap Update: PoPs, Peering, and the North Bridge
What about Level3 and my ISP Armstrong Cable (area code 16001)? I can get you contacts for my ISP if you wish as I work here, lol. Also When do we expect this to start working and when should we notice a difference?
: ❅ Holiday skins! What would you want to see? ❅
Snow Plow Braum. King Furher Yasuo. FMA Ez or Talon. Snowball Rammus. Reindeer Sejuani. Christmas Tree Jarvin. That's all I got.

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